I, Ross Harlan, do solemnly swear...

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I, Ross Harlan, do solemnly swear...

Post by Fakjaw » Sun Mar 10, 2013 7:25 pm

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~ 1994, USA

Hah. Ray is at it again. Being a smart mouth to Sarge'. There go the push-ups. They keep stacking up lately. I guess Sarge' is trying to flush 'em out that way. Ray's a tough one though, he can take on set after set. With a grin on his face too. He's one of those guys. One of those.


~ 1995, USA
I'm getting the hang of this gun. Scores are higher than ever and I know the thing inside-out. Seems like Ray was born for his LMG. He runs around with it like it would be a standard rifle, the crazy fucker. We hit top score last session, the both of us. Maybe I'll win that fuckin' cake this time, finally. If Ray doesn't share his when he gets one, I'll push his face in the mud on the next drill run.


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~ 1997, Afghanistan

Get the clip, get it in there! Fuckin' jamming piece of shit. Where'd I put my-- fuck, never mind. This heat is frying my brain... and those fuckers out there are used to it. Last clip. Better make this one count. Eat this, fuckers! ----- Empty again. "Ey Ray, I need a clip! --- Ray! --- Ey Ray! ----- Fuck... --- "CARL!" --- "WHAT!" --- "WHERE'S RAY?!" --- "OUT BACK!"

Always runnin' of to do his own... Where's this guy. Fuck, I'm sweating like a pig. I hope someone has an extra canister on hand. Ah, there he is, somewhat in the distance. Sporting his light machine gun of course. He loves that thing. Uses it whenever possible.
"RAY!" ----- "EY RAY!" ---. The thing took away half his hearing though, the stupid fuck, hah. "RAAAY!". Finally got his attention as he halts his salvo and turns his head to my direction. "You got any extra clips? I'm out." --- "WHAT?! A CLIP?!" ---- "Yeah a clip, I'm out! -- "HAH, YOU TRIGGER HAPPY SON OF A-"


Ricochet.
Right side of the head.
The insides.
A thud.
He's on the ground.
The blood.
The insides.


Ray...
Ray?
Ray?!

RAY?!
RAAAY!
RAAAAAAYY!!!



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~ 2001, Iraq

The sight of it. Mangled, minced and dangling from the skin. A pale rod of calcium sticking out, fractured. A mush of liquids and partial solids on the ground surrounds it. Dulled moans exit from the man's mouth as a result of his severe concusion. I've had training for this, but it never hit quite as hard. What it looks like? Exactly how it sounds like. A gory mess of human flesh...

I'm the one who has to patch him up. Think procedures. Stopping blood loss is the first step. Tourniquet... What else? Disinfectant. The dulled moans turn into a loud scream as the stinging oil hits the wall of severed flesh. Seems like his endorphines are not run out yet. The surrounding soldiers turn their heads at the sound and sight at of the man. A stab of morphine should make him more at ease. The blood stopped flowing, the bloody strips of meat have become pale. He'll make it.




To be updated...
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Re: I, Ross Harlan, do solemnly swear...

Post by Arnold_Berlanga » Fri Mar 15, 2013 9:03 am

I'm already interested, you have quite a talent. Keep 'em coming!
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Post by Fakjaw » Sat Mar 16, 2013 12:19 am

Demonic Symphony wrote:I'm already interested, you have quite a talent. Keep 'em coming!

Thanks for the kind words.
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Re: I, Ross Harlan, do solemnly swear...

Post by Young » Sat Mar 16, 2013 12:24 am

You really do have a talent. Great job so far, this looks superb.

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Re: I, Ross Harlan, do solemnly swear...

Post by Taifun » Sun Mar 17, 2013 2:20 am

Heeey Faaakjaw, writing a sto- it's quite cool, actually. Can't wait for more. :)

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Post by starix » Mon Mar 18, 2013 4:28 pm

Wow cool, update it! :P
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Re: I, Ross Harlan, do solemnly swear...

Post by Ruskie » Sat Mar 23, 2013 12:07 pm

NICEEEE
And as a fading red iron-cross shaped tail light disappeared down a bombed out highway, the only sound louder than a tricked out Shovelhead skull bound for glory, was the rusty laughter of the devil himself. His work here was finally done.
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Post by Fakjaw » Thu Jul 18, 2013 8:04 pm

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Post by a$ap nitti » Thu Jul 18, 2013 8:44 pm

Amazing written, I'll stay tuned

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Re: I, Ross Harlan, do solemnly swear...

Post by Narith » Wed Dec 11, 2013 1:00 am

You made Ray die, you prick! :'(


I love it.
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Post by Don_Jeramiah » Fri Dec 13, 2013 4:59 am

This is a amazing, waiting for more.

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Post by Fakjaw » Sat Dec 14, 2013 1:39 am

Narith wrote:You made Ray die, you prick! :'(


I love it.


He aint dead son!

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Re: I, Ross Harlan, do solemnly swear...

Post by Narith » Mon Dec 16, 2013 1:42 pm

Update this for Christmas, please. I'm intrigued.
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Re: I, Ross Harlan, do solemnly swear...

Post by Fakjaw » Thu Jan 30, 2014 4:55 pm

Fakjaw wrote:
Narith wrote:You made Ray die, you prick! :'(


I love it.


He aint dead son!

I thought you meant my character Ray Lane. Only now do I realize you meant Ray in the story haha.

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